Thought Trains

For Todays Post, is a Poem which I rate well below par as it were. It is one area that I need work on and may very well do a number of other in this area to improve this style.

In other words, the Poem for today is A Love Poem, BUT it does not mention Names or genders etc. Thus leaving this open to the reader to line up a gender or Person to the Poem in question. It has been a struggle to create a poem that does not mention He or Her or She, Neither has it been easy to write a Poem that does not lay claim on a gender as the object of the emotion etc..

Thus with such limitations I wanted to improve how I wrote such poetry, and in the end creating a love Poem that carries the subject of Love in ALL areas of a Love Poem.

About The Poem:

Creating or should I say Composing Love Poetry has become something that I enjoy, yet there was an area that I have never stepped into. A poem where no gender or and other word that gives light to Who the Object of Love is. Thus leaving the reader to provide that Light for themselves as they read the poem.

Those that I read on this version, I believe may have fallen a little short or found another way about this. Thus I wished to compose a poem that set within this style and level that I aim to reach. There have been poetry like this one composed where the object for effection was God. But My wish is NOT to lay that claim out myself. BUT allow the reader to place the object to whom ever they wished and still that poem would fit perfectly.

If I succeed in any of this remains to be seen in the end. But I realise straight off My usual high standard has not been reached. BUT that is my tough line that I take on my own poetry.

Having said this; Please enjoy This Poem

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(( Normally I use a Photograph to try and show a brief glimpse into a Poem I composed and give credit to the creator of the photograph here. This Photo has been generated by AI and has taken a couple of Clips wherethe one seen was the best of those offered. Does it work?))

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Thought Trains



A thought train leaving town, once mine,
Without trace or nothing on the line,
For winds awaken and build now,
Yet always such thoughts will allow.


This still strength that here guides my sails,
A spring that motivates life’s trails,
 And snares that I stumble over,
Yet Gracefull you lead me in clover. 


Deep despair covered all until
You liberated me at will,
A humble man without a dream,
Whom you made to feel thus supreme. 


Wild waters would I sail for you,
In Sea’s unchartered to struggle through,
To see you yet, bloom here again,
Oh sun kissed spring my life’s own glen.


In this beating heart where my breath,
A bubbling well of tears did lay death,
Your endless display brought much joy,
As a soul leaps to always employ. 







© Pat Fitzgerald 2025

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ENDING THOUGHTS:

Thank you for following me on my little journey, that is composing or writing poetry. If Life is a journey which we all walk on and my journey in creating Poetry is a journey of it’s own. Which I still learn much on as I write.

At times I experiment on methods or way how I can improve my poetry, therefore getting feed back is always most welcome for such as these.

When I write poetry, some readers may be offended with something within the poetry. I do not write to offend, But such are written for reasons I outline in the posts. Often I miss typos and mistakes when publishing each poem. BUT I correct the moment I discover such mistakes.

But Poetry is a form of art work that I enjoy and thus using it in a manner to touch or inspire the reader.

Thank you for joining me on this journey.

Poetry is a learning curve where I always work to improve. A lot of work goes into editing and reediting and then repeating that process on a number of occasions until I am happy with the result. This is how I operate in creating posts to share here.

Please forgive for any such mistakes and for your understanding this.

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