My Sweetest Rose

Introduction:

Following my recent posts and my own working on improving my poetry. But also Improving my poetry in regards to how it is received by readers. There will always be times when some poetry will not be received well, wither by choice or by a topic of as poem.

BUT I stated in the past that my desire is to leave Love Poetry here on this Blog as a part of my own creations and journey as a poet that will live on after me. This is a desire from being a fan of such poets as John Donne and his Sonnets to Patrick Kavanagh (one of Irelands greats)

Thus Today is another journey down that road of creating a love poem. “My Sweetest Rose”, is a result of a combination of my loved Roses and My own imagination and desire to create such a love poem.

Also in other thoughts I felt that I was at times very long winded (as we would say here) and would ramble on a lot , when shorter explainations would tell a whole lot more..

About The Poem:

My first thought in composing this poem was my imagination in creating a thought of my Roses some of which can be sweet scented and a prize of mine where my mind wanders away while tending to them.

So I combined such thoughts on my roses which are still early in their growth this year and my desire to create such a love poem. This is where I placed such a Sweet scented Rose and a Persons Love for someone into one poem. Almost combinng both where at times one may think if both were one and same, or Not. My development of this Poem had eventually carried me on a road I least expected and the result is what one reads below.

Often when walking in gardens where Roses bloom, I am carried on following the sweet scent that lingers in the air to where tose roses can be found. With such a scent that lingers after such a loved one, also one will be carried off as their loved one walks by. This is the thoughts one should Have when reading this poem.

Having said all of this. Please Enjoy This Poem:


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My Sweetest Rose



Soft as the summer rose, her grace unfolds,
In garden glows, her beauty, truth be told.
With scent sweeter than the dawn's first light,
She captivates all with her gentle might.


Her voice, a melody, in nature's choir,
Each note a spark, igniting passion's fire.
In her embrace, all worries disappear,
Her love, a beacon, guiding me near.


She is my sweetest rose, my heart's delight,
In her love's embrace, I find my flight.
Through storms and calm, she stands by my side,
My guiding light, my love, my pride.


In the garden of life, she blooms divine,
Her love, a treasure, no riches can outshine.
With her, I'll stay, come what may,
My sweetest rose, forever and always.



© Pat Fitzgerald 2024

ENDING THOUGHTS:

Thank you for following me on this journey, This is my journey through composing and creating poetry. If Life is a journey which we all walk on, then my journey in creating Poetry is a journey of it’s own. Which I still learn much on as I write.

At times I experiment on methods or way how I can improve my poetry, therefore getting feedback is always most welcome for such as these.

In writing poetry some topics will either offend folks or a reader either may agree with a point or disagree with. I am Perfectly OK with how folks feel on some Poetry, even if they disagree with my views. But Poetry is a form of art work that I enjoy and thus using it in a manner to touch or inspire the reader.

I wish to Pass on my thanks to you for joining me on this journey.

Poetry for me is a constant learning curve that I always strive to improve. Often due to the speed of my typing and a few other issues, mistakes and typos will find their way into published posts. I continue to work on improving this as I move along. One such change is how I have been writing and how my poetry appears in relation to how the rest of the blog appears. So much work goes into editing and reediting and then repeating that process on a number of occasions until i am happy with the result.

Please forgive for any such mistakes and for your understanding this.


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6 thoughts on “My Sweetest Rose

    1. I doubt many will believe that This has been 100% imagination. I set myself a topic challenge to write a love poem on a basis that one felt as such to their beloved… I love setting such challenges to help work on my poetry writing

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