Untitled Series Part 5

To continue with the Untitled Series, I sat here this evening with music going to both provide a block from outside disturbances, and from interest in listening to a little country music. I became inspired with topics I touched on in the past and yet to touch on in a slightly different view. Or so was my hope when I began typing.

One such song that was playing also provided inspiration, Jelly Roll a man with an interesting story in life has been making waves in some areas and one song of his now seems to fit with todays poem, If folks should decide to hear this song you can check out Jelly Roll Save Me .

It is safe to say that today’s poem is Based on faith, and on those who feel Hopeless and broken hearted. The end tale should be that there is help, there is hope beyond the negative spin and the overwhelming tide of hate and disbelief. The end result one should be inspired to either realise that help is about OR be inspired to seek out those who walk past with a smile that is bright, yet the broken heart is beneath all.

Having said all of this, Please Try to enjoy this poem:


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Untitled Series Part 5



Did you see it?  The smile that hides all things!
Soaring high on wings of Kings and such strings.
The animated gestures that follow,
Helps to hide pain inside, nothing hollow.


Can you see the hiding smile left to see, 
No spirit on bended knee could break free.
The hurt that rips a heart apart and start,
Exposing pain laying dormant, an art!


Did you see the hidden tears as you past,
The rains that fall disguise a gulf that last.
Riding on a train of hope just to cope,
A slippery slope breaking losing rope.


In a world when negative spin can win,
A hope for the hopeless there to begin.
 Help comes on high yet a cry that is nigh,
Here one finds help for the helpless who cry.


Still beyond the spin past the wheelie bin,
Most shall pass and grin at those who begin.
One step to view another there for you,
Where the broken hearted in Faith walk through.




© Pat Fitzgerald 2023

Thank you for reading this far into this post, It means a lot to me that folks read my work and enjoy them. Some poetry contain topics that may or may not contain issues that readers either agree with or experience or simply will disagree with. But still Poetry is a form of art work that I enjoy and thus using it in a manner to touch the reader.

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7 thoughts on “Untitled Series Part 5

  1. I feel every line you write every word deep down touches me pat and yes no one truly knows what lies behind a smile because we all no matter who we are hide pain your poetry shows what a true poet should be inspirational and yes poetry is art ❤

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