Greetings all, Following weeks of exploring my trek through Celtic Folklore, I have decided to end any further move into folklore for poetry at this point in time. Having laid all that aside, Today’s Poem has a special treat (for me mostly so.) I am composing a poem that struck me on a recent day out and composed the first of what will be 3 very different styles. But the poem will be pretty much the same.
The Challenge: Compose a poem in the 3 styles that I have composed over the past while. A love Poem where the Love is Nature. Take sight, sound and all that is seen and felt to create a love poem, without mention of any name of where or what. Like Wildlife or buildings or rocks etc.
The style, For Today’s Poem which is in Aa Bb, with Alliteration, assonance and all the poetic dressing that I was able to bring into this poem, without disturbing the flow etc of the poem. No overdressed Words or lines that do not have a part in the poem. In the coming weeks, the Styles will be Free Verse and a Combination of Free Verse and a Little of Aa Bb style.
When I need time, space and all that brings, I go to one of a number of places. But on this occasion I went to one spot, which is a common haunt for me. A most beautiful place that bings the feeling that we are on the edge of no where and every where and yet all places at once. A place that calms me and brings peace to my soul. Today’s poem was brought out of this area and my hope is that readers will honestly enjoy this. I welcome any feeback on Today’s Poem in the comments.

At the Edge of Earth and Ocean
Soft strokes that strike my upturned face,
And thread through every tangled trace
Of strands that fall or freely fly,
You brush me past, you pass me by.
A golden glow that gathers near,
To chase the chill and make it clear,
A force that bends the blades that lean
Wherever your bright breath has been.
Soft shapes that sail on unseen streams,
With wings that weave through day and dreams,
No hurried haste, no harsh demand,
Just grace that settles on the land.
A rushing roar that races round,
Yet leaves no word, no uttered sound,
It slips past where the senses lean,
But one deep note cuts clear and clean.
From heights where only strong winds climb,
I see the whole wide world in time,
Where ancient spines of stone extend
To where the blue and white contend.
Far down the slope where soft sands sleep,
One burning eye does watch and keep
The line where wild waves wake and weep,
A constant flame, a promise deep.
White fury flies from blackened sides,
Where strength meets force, where pride abides,
Each blow that beats, each burst that breaks,
The very bedrock softly shakes.
It falls away, it flees and flows,
Yet every absence deeper grows,
It pulls away to pull back near,
Until the line has disappeared.
Where blue turns grey and grey turns gold,
And every hue of heaven glows,
No single shade can hold the sight,
For you are all, and all is light.
Where carved in stone, the stories stand,
Of things long passed, of lives once planned,
You guard the grief, you hold the grace,
And give each ghost a holy place.
Through thickest haze and tearing spray,
One steady flame points out the way,
It never bows, it never bends,
Beyond the storms, beyond the ends.
So here I stand where earth meets ocean,
With all you give and all I keep,
No words can weigh, no mind can measure,
You are my life, my love, my treasure.
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Wonderful this trek.
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Thank you. I am delighted that you enjoyed this trek.
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brilliant mate.
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Thank you Billy, It is always great to turn back to a structured form of poetry at times.. LoL..
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This is a beautifully immersive piece rich with rhythm, imagery, and a strong sense of place and emotion. The way the sea, wind, stone, and light are woven together gives it a flowing, almost meditative quality. It reads like a love letter between nature and presence itself, steady and expansive throughout.
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Beautifully penned, Pat!!!! Loved the journey your words took us on!!!
Bravo, Pat Bravo!!!
Hope all is well with You????
Chuck :- )
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Thank you chuck, This poem is in fact the first 1 of 3 Poems from one trip.. But in 3 different styles.. and believe m,e each poem Rock if you can understand… I am actually excited for this and the other two I am preparing to load but may set to go live on Friday… I am considering of now placing All 3 together as one collection that go together.. But poetry does excite me, a little strange to say that having grown as a poet I found 3 different styles of one trip , one place and what they bring I am curious what readers will find in these.. I hope all is well my friend..
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You might want to consider going ahead and posting each one as a solo and then after having posted all three as singles then have a post with all three for those who may have missed the single postings. You will get more views, I think, if you do it that way? Just me, My Friend!!!
Chuck :- )
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I may post them as individual posts after that as one already sits as a seperate post.. But all 3 are set to appear live on Friday morning at 10 am gmt they are very well worth reading together anyways.. But seperate posts could very well follow. thank you my friend.
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Thank you.
I feel so sad. I try to remember and grasp and hold for at least a moment of what you just have told. But it feels like it was read, like one wave of silent reaching words, but, that hit something somewhere somehow – me, I know now, and resound in all kind of joyful feelings turning to enjoyful beings.
Sorry, I suffer from a chronic Beautyful Poetry Impulsive-Reply-Try Disorder. If you ever find a poem you like on a coffee-house bill backside that is about a lake called same as the coffee-house starting with O. – that was me!!!:) Tell them I am sorry for the missing tip. Tell them also I will pay asap for the coffee.:)
Just kidding.
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Thank you friend.. kind words move further than other words, because they travel free to flow in the breeze.
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I wonder why we like kind, kind of like which likes us, thus it must be true or nothing at all. Kind to someone that isn’t by someone that is not. That one non-existent person that covers all and holds all fake compliments reaches far and fast. Shortly ashore while truth sails slow, steady and so or so, whatever the Sea sees she carries, but no one sounds sand when the waves wash over it once more.
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We sail on a sea of life and we often come upon others when sailing along lifes ocean..
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