Submission

As in recent Posts, I had continued to work on composing Poetry from within a frame work that I hope would find it flows easily and knitted together more easily as it were.

Today’s Poem is one of a View at Nature and how one could view Nature from Rose Tinted Glasses. But could it be Rose Tinted Glasses to view Nature in such a manner? Or thus would it be possible to view or look at nature in such a way. Where A World that seeks to destroy or mould it in their own framework or design, Could there be a different way about this or are we all grasping at things the wrong way?

About The Poem:

Addressing Nature in Poetry can become repetitive and dull at times, Yet when one looks upon the Beauty of Nature , we can only ask such questions like how it can be preserved and nurtured? On another front one could be encouraged to look at nature from another aspect rather than the rushed, worldly view of things and maybe even for moments to View from Rose Tinted Glasses.

For this Poem I used the same method that was used for the last few poems. Thus comments on this style of work or the Poetry in general helps at times. I change how i structure poetry as I learn or feel that some poetry may work. This is where readers can be of help. Aside from the typos that may appear and in some way miss my eye as I edit, I welcome all any any remarks.. It all helps.

Having Said all of This; Please Enjoy This Poem:


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Submission



Sitting silent among wild flowers,
Where colours adorn old stone towers,
And a sparkling river flows by,
This tranquil place does still supply,


Always answering calls to sit,
My heart did call to there submit,
In Natures garden as her guest,
Ne’er to protest to do my best.


The Sweet singing of Birds fill the air,
As wildlife scurry around where,
Life seemed to be in one accord,
Thus I Lay where harmony poured.


Freely from Nature’s bosom and felt
By all from her nurturing belt,
As her tender embrace to all,
Where Rose tinted glasses yet fall.


Thus the creators eye and mine,
Find love within the grand design,
Contrasting what the naked eye spies,
Disguise the prize where people cries.






© Pat Fitzgerald 2025



ENDING THOUGHTS:

Thank you for following me on my little journey, that is composing or writing poetry. If Life is a journey which we all walk on and my journey in creating Poetry is a journey of it’s own. Which I still learn much on as I write.

At times I experiment on methods or way how I can improve my poetry, therefore getting feed back is always most welcome for such as these.

When I write poetry, some readers may be offended with something within the poetry. I do not write to offend, But such are written for reasons I outline in the posts. Often I miss typos and mistakes when publishing each poem. BUT I correct the moment I discover such mistakes.

But Poetry is a form of art work that I enjoy and thus using it in a manner to touch or inspire the reader.

Thank you for joining me on this journey.

Poetry is a learning curve where I always work to improve. A lot of work goes into editing and reediting and then repeating that process on a number of occasions until I am happy with the result. This is how I operate in creating posts to share here.

Please forgive for any such mistakes and for your understanding this.


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8 thoughts on “Submission

  1. Bravo, Pat!!! Loved the way you weaved this!!!
    Especially, the stanza:
    The Sweet singing of Birds fill the air,
    As wildlife scurry around where,
    Life seemed to be in one accord,
    Thus I Lay where harmony poured.

    Bravo!!
    Chuck
    😁✨💕👍

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