The Longest Night

In recent times as a family a decision was made to spend a day with our elderly Father who recently turned 89 years. Also one needing medical care and as a man who now cannot administer his own medications. We take this as apart of duties both caring for him and spoending time with him. But in more recent weeks we stepped it up and decided to stay over at his place a night each (with enough siblings for each day of the week). But some being abroad means one will do double duty.. That having being taken care of This past wek I stayed a night over at my fathers place, This was a difficult decision for us all, because few have stayed over since our mother passed a number of years ago.

About The Poem:

That night I sat in a room I grew up in and listened to the sounds and noises of the night, This time such sounds and noises were so much different. All that was heard was silence, the noises from houses on the neighbourhood was silence. Most now are elderly as children moved away over the years.

This night brought a lot of emotions and thoughts and todays Poem. Simply put all explained above is this poem, and indeed within the liens of this poem are memories , sounds and what was from the child of a Younger self as a child compared to those of my old self. I hope this poem comes accross as I intended it.

Things that worried a young child,now seems ppointless and thoughts of a child were forgotten by time itself. This is the Poem in itself.. Thoughts, memories of a child looked back on by an adult self over 40 years later.

Having said all of this; Please enjoy This Poem:


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The Longest Night



Where childhood eyes once peered at night,
Daylight disappeared to take flight.
His thoughts and dreams lived once more are,
Forgotten with time, now unaware.


Shadows of the night danced for joy,
deployed there almost a decoy.
Eyes peeked there viewing shapes given,
Childhood views time had forgiven.


Eyes that dreamed with delight are wind blown,
Swept over fast by times own throne.
Blown away by the night, ne’er seen,
Innocence forgot this old scene.


Sound once travelled, now stood silent,
Harmless tones often felt violent.
Memories dormant came alive,
Yet now travelled, through this hive.



As dawn had crept, in with a chill,
Left him losing sleep with some skill.
Flickering thoughts remain ne’er cold,
For glittering visions, ne’er gold.




© Pat Fitzgerald 2025


ENDING THOUGHTS:

Thank you for following me on my little journey, that is composing or writing poetry. If Life is a journey which we all walk on and my journey in creating Poetry is a journey of it’s own. Which I still learn much on as I write.

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But Poetry is a form of art work that I enjoy and thus using it in a manner to touch or inspire the reader.

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6 thoughts on “The Longest Night

  1. Ah, your intro resonated with me most of all. The confessional aspect of it, how we can go home again, bittersweet, and how we revisit the template of our deepest memories built on space, sounds, smells, light, and shadows. I experienced this in my waking life and in dreams. Either way, I wish I could tell myself, from the older version of me, to the younger version of me, that everything’s going to be all right. Beautiful sentiments from you, heartfelt that resonate not only with me but to your loved ones as well.

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    1. Thank you. There are things and advice the younger self could give as would the older self give advice.. either way our seteps in life when revisited are gems that can often spark a creative element. Thank you again.

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