Like Brightest Stars

With a Title like this, I felt that it would be either cheesy or another clear flop. BUT Still I had such a brief sentence, and wanted to give myself another challenge; To compose a poem plainly and simple, From those words. I wish I could state that this poem comes from the heart of one who holds one like this! BUT it is a Poem that was created from a couple of words, thus letting words flow around them to compose this Poem. I know there are those who could and would use such thoughts and words for their loved ones.. I would say “feel free”.

About The Poem:

Todays Poem has sprung out of another challenge I set for myself. These are challenges as you have noticed and read, Where I use such challenges to work on improving my Poetry and also a Hope that a gem of a Poem is found by such an exercise.

But the thought hat one has someone whith whom they are smitten by, their eyes, Their voice or their smile is a wonderful thought and more than very possible. Thus it is an area I would have loved Poetry to touch such areas. To write on Love is a very pleasing task and most enjoyable to say the least.

To have one whith whom their eyes brighten their life or The sound of their voice would calm the storms in your life, again a thought that would be fantastic.

I am certain that the words used here do not insult, But help to find words etc that fill a space where words were needed.

Having said all of this; Please Enjoy This poem:

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(( The above Photograph was taken from an outside source and posted
here with thanks and as always Copyrite remains with those who carried
out such great work ))

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Like Brightest Stars



Her eyes sparkle, like brightest stars,
Who lights up a life, and hides my scars.
For the darkest night ne’er felt right,
Than this sight, my sweetest delight.


It’s her Smile, that carries for miles,
Through all those tracks and living trials.
When Life’s hurdles will yet appear,
Her presence makes everything clear.


Her voice is a melody sweet,
Who calms the storms within, e’er we meet.
The Jewel of my heart so bright,
A treasure to hold, my delight.


My soul has a home, in her eyes,
Never to be alone, I rise.
Yet at my side knowing, I can face,
Hurdles of life, - all with grace.


Let me thus bask by her side and rise,
To a smile, thus as my disguise.
With her near, my life e’er complete,
My heart's jewel, my soul's retreat.


Eyes that sparkle like brightest stars,
Lighting a life from near or far.
Such smiles carry for miles and more,
Clouds now clear, thus ne’er a bore.




© Pat Fitzgerald 2024

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ENDING THOUGHTS:

Thank you for following me on this journey, that is composing and creating poetry. If Life is a journey which we all walk on, then my journey in creating Poetry is a journey of it’s own. Which I still learn much on as I write.

At times I experiment on methods or way how I can improve my poetry, therefore getting feedback is always most welcome for such as these.

When I write poetry, some readers may be offended with something within the poetry. I do not write to offend, But such are written for reasons I outline in the posts. Often I miss typos and mistakes when publishing each poem. BUT I correct the moment I discover such mistakes.

But Poetry is a form of art work that I enjoy and thus using it in a manner to touch or inspire the reader.

I would like to Pass on my thanks to you for joining me on this journey.

Poetry is a learning curve where I always strive to improve. Often due to the speed of my typing and a few other issues, mistakes and typos will find their way into published posts. I continue to work on improving this as I move along. One such change is how I have been writing and how my poetry appears in relation to how the rest of the blog appears. So much work goes into editing and reediting and then repeating that process on a number of occasions until i am happy with the result.

Please forgive for any such mistakes and for your understanding this.

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