Sweetest Desire

In thinking about todays post, I wanted to again compose a Poem with the set topic of Love in mind. Therefore I was determined to compose a Love Poem and in turn strive to perfect writing this type of poem. Or at the very least I hope to become a little better than what I rate myself at this.

About The Poem:

As stated above, todays poem is a Love Poem, I have never felt entirely happy in the finished product of my Love Poetry, thus the task I have set is to wrok on composing a Love Poem.

In this situation, the love in question is an unattainable one on, with whom many have tried but none have yet won her heart, not even the one speaking within the poem. Simply placed One can strive for love But one may never gain the heart of the one with whom they have strived to win. But should they deny such a love existed?

But in a poetic sence and mindset, there are few things more beautiful than Love and a Love for someone else. Hence my desire to work on Creating a Love poem and indeed better my ability to compose a Love Poem.

As I have done before, I give myself a starting point of either a Topic or a few words in which to begin with. This has been the case in this post, and I hope that folks like the end result.

Having said all of this, Please enjoy this Poem:

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(( The above Photograph was taken from an outside source and posted
here with thanks and as always Copyrite remains with those who carried
out such great work ))

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       Sweetest Desire



No city light can hold her e’er so tight,
Or Wandering Knight could soon rewrite.
Desired by many but, none won her heart,
My Country Rose – She will not depart.


In gardens of dreams, where flowers doth bloom,
Amongst the fragrance - and sweet perfume,
Is a delicate petal, my heart's boon,
Sweetest of desires, this heart's unsung tune.


This beauty so rare, a treasure to hold,
A sweet flower of desires, my heart's gold.
With lips thus sweet and her eyes shine so bright,
For she excites me, a wondrous sight.


Beware oh heart, of - liars and fires,
Who promise all, with honeyed words and lies.
And blackened hearts, - of greed and deceit,
Leaving prey nothing, but heartache and woe.


But still no one yet - can hold her close,
This heart's sweetest flower desires her most.
My own treasure, this gem thats rare to find,
My heart's delight, sweetest desire in kind.




© Pat Fitzgerald 2024

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ENDING THOUGHTS:

Thank you for following me on this journey, that is composing and creating poetry. If Life is a journey which we all walk on, then my journey in creating Poetry is a journey of it’s own. Which I still learn much on as I write.

At times I experiment on methods or way how I can improve my poetry, therefore getting feedback is always most welcome for such as these.

When I write poetry, some readers may be offended with something within the poetry. I do not write to offend, But such are written for reasons I outline in the posts. Often I miss typos and mistakes when publishing each poem. BUT I correct the moment I discover such mistakes.

But Poetry is a form of art work that I enjoy and thus using it in a manner to touch or inspire the reader.

I would like to Pass on my thanks to you for joining me on this journey.

Poetry is a learning curve where I always strive to improve. Often due to the speed of my typing and a few other issues, mistakes and typos will find their way into published posts. I continue to work on improving this as I move along. One such change is how I have been writing and how my poetry appears in relation to how the rest of the blog appears. So much work goes into editing and reediting and then repeating that process on a number of occasions until i am happy with the result.

Please forgive for any such mistakes and for your understanding this.

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